Question

Nie jestem jakoś specjalnie dobra z angielskiego, dostałam dwa maile do napisania, proszę o sprawdzenie.

1.

Jesteś na obozie, gdzie poznałaś ciekawą osobę. W emailu do kolegi/koleżanki z Anglii, napisz:

*jak się poznaliście

*jak on/ona wygląda

*jaki on/ona jest

Oto, co ja zdołałam napisać.

Hi Jenny,

Thanks for your last email. Actually I'm in campsite in Paris. LAst week I met really interesting person.

Her name is Hilary and she is fifteen. She's from Berlin, Germany, but she speak English, German and she is learning Polish. She's got long brown hair and blue eyes. She is taller than me.

She's very polite and I like her. I always see smile on her face. She's ull of energy. I'm sure you'd like her. I can't wait to hear from you again soon!

2.

W klubie sportowym poznałaś ciekawą osobę. W emailu do kolegi/koleżanki z Anglii napisz:

*jak się poznaliście

*jak on/on wygląda

*jak zamierzasz spędzić z nim/nią najbliższy weekend

Moje wypociny:

Hi Mary,

Thanks for your last email. I miss you! Two weeks ago I joined to sports club. At the beggining I didn't know anybody, but next day I met a one interesting person who play handball like me.

Her name is Britney nd she's seventeen, but she look like she'd twenty. She's a pretty girl. She's got wavy, red hair and green eyes. She's taller than me.

In this weekend we are going to the cinema together. Then we are going shopping. I hope it will be cool.

greetings for you and your family.

Love,

Będzie najlepsza. Proszę o wyłapanie wszystkich błędów i oczywiście poprawy.

Answer 1

Hi Jenny,

Thanks for your last email. Actually I'm on campsite in Paris. Last week I met really interesting person.

Her name is Hilary and she is fifteen. She's from Berlin in Germany but she speaks English, German and she is learning Polish. She's got long brown hair and blue eyes. She is taller than me.

She's very polite and I like her. I always see smile on her face. She's full of energy. I'm sure you'd like her.

I can't wait to hear from you again soon!

 

Hi Mary,

Thanks for your last email. I miss you! Two weeks ago I joined to sports club. At the beginning I hadn'tknown anybody but next day I met a one interesting person who is playing handball like me.

Her name is Britney and she's seventeen, but she look like she had twenty years old. She's a pretty girl. She's got wavy, red hair and green eyes. She's taller than me.

In this weekend we are going to the cinema together.  Then we are going shopping. I hope it will be cool.

Greetings for you and your family.

Love,

 

 

Błędy pogrubione :)