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I like to talk about My last holidays
My family and I traveled to Dubai. We took the plane from Madrid to Dubai, after a long journey of 7 hours, we finally arrived. Dubai is a beautiful and very rich city. Police in the city drive Ferraris. We stayed in a luxurious hotel with fantastic sea views, moreover we met millionaire people. The first day we went to breakfast at the hotel, the breakfast was very good, there was a great variety of dishes on the menu. Later we did a car tour through the desert, the dunes were impressive. At night we went to the hotel to enjoy the spa.
The next morning, we visited the tallest building in the world, the Burj Khalifa, it is about eight hundred twenty-six meters high. In the afternoon we flew over The Palm in the helicopter. The Palm is a series of artificial islands that have form of sheet. In the evening we went to tour the city in a tourist bus. On the third day we took a camel ride through the desert.
I like to talk about My last holidays
My family and I traveled to Dubai. We took the plane from Madrid to Dubai, after a long journey of 7 hours, we finally arrived. Dubai is a beautiful and very rich city. Police in the city drive Ferraris. We stayed in a luxurious hotel with fantastic sea views, moreover we met millionaire people. The first day we went to breakfast at the hotel, the breakfast was very good, there was a great variety of dishes on the menu. Later we did a car tour through the desert, the dunes were impressive. At night we went to the hotel to enjoy the spa.
The next morning, we visited the tallest building in the world, the Burj Khalifa, it is about eight hundred twenty-six meters high. In the afternoon we flew over The Palm in the helicopter. The Palm is a series of artificial islands that have form of sheet. In the evening we went to tour the city in a tourist bus. On the third day we took a camel ride through the desert.
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I like to talk about my last vacation
My family and I travel to Dubai. We took the plane from Madrid to Dubai, after a long trip of 7 hours, we finally arrived. Dubai is a beautiful and very rich city. The city police drive Ferraris. We stayed in a luxury hotel with fantastic sea views, in addition to meeting millionaire people. The first day in this wonderful place we went to breakfast at the hotel, breakfast was very good , there was a great variety of dishes on the menu. Hours later we took a drive through the desert, the dunes were impressive and at night we went to the hotel to enjoy the spa.
The next morning, we went to visit the tallest building in the world, the Burj Khalifa, which is about eight hundred and twenty-six meters high. In the afternoon we fly over the palm tree in the helicopter. The palm is a series of artificial islands that are shaped like sheet metal. In the afternoon we went to tour the city in a tourist bus and finally o n the third day we took a camel ride through the desert. Dubai was one of the best places I visited in my life, one of the most beautiful and richest countries in the world and do not forget its places that you certainly should not miss seeing it as the Burj Khalifa If you want to enjoy the most breathtaking views And impressive from Dubai, the best thing is to climb to the top of the Burj Khalifa and undoubtedly the most demanded activity of Dubai and that is, a trip to Dubai would lose a lot without a visit to the desert. That was my last vacation in Dubai