Question

Napisz po angielsku opowiadanie o huraganie, trzęsieniu ziemi lub erupcji wulkanu. (napisałam to już, ale chciałabym, żeby ktoś mi to sprawdził i poprawił błędy)
It happen, when I was in Italia on holiday in 2008.
I with my family had a great fun despite bad weather. Was very cloudy and windy. We went to the beach, but we didn't swim in sea. We were gleaning shells when suddenly other people on the beach were starting shout. I looked over the sea and I also was starting shout and run away. Over the sea was something terrible. It was a storm or a hurricane. All the people were scared and they were fleeing to the city. I did it too.
When the hurricane calmed down the people were looking for loved ones. And I with my mum, dad and brother returned to the our hotel and we were happy that nothing happened to us.
Fortunately the storm passed to our city.

Answer 1

It happened, when I was in Italia on holiday in 2008.
I with my family had a great fun despite bad weather. It was very cloudy and windy. We went to the beach, but we didn't swim in sea. We were gleaning shells when suddenly other people on the beach were starting shout. I looked over the sea and I also was starting shout and run away. Over the sea was something terrible. It was a storm or a hurricane. All the people were scared and they were fleeing to the city. I did it too.
When the hurricane calmed down the people were looking for loved ones. And I with my mum, dad and brother returned to the our hotel
and we were happy that nothing happened to us.
Fortunately the storm passed to our city.