Napisz opowiadanie, w którym nieumiejętne posługiwanie się nowoczesną technologią sprowadza na bohatera niebezpieczeństwo. Proszę o sprawdzenie gramatyki :
It all started in December, during Christmas. My lazy cousin Pit visited me in my house to celebrate holidays together, but it seemed that he did not have any other place to live in. It was a little bit annoying but I could not reject because he was a part of my family.
There was not any Christmas atmosphere. Our relationships limited to short conversations during meals. He never moved out from home, he must be very bored. I was still busy as I had very crucial issues related with my work. I was preparing big project on my computer since two weeks. One day I had to go work for whole day. I was praying that Pit had not done anything stupid. When I came home, he was nervously walked around the room. He was looking like child who lost in the fog. I scared about what he could done. He pointed on my working room. When I passed the door I saw my computer. It was on and did not react. I felt chill on me neck. There was my project which I had been working for 2 weeks. He said that he just surfed on internet. He was so bored that he clicked on every advertisements. That is how he knew about viruses.
As soon as I heard it, I would like to kill my cousin, but I did not it. Fortunetly a few informatician repaired my computer and recover data. Pit had to pay 200 zloty, he served for that.
He never moved out from home, he must be very bored - ...he must have been very bored
he was nervously walked around the room -... was nervously walking ...
I scared about what he could done - I felt scared ...
I felt chill on me neck. - ... my neck (lepiej I felt shiver onmy neck)
That is how he knew - that is what he knew
I would like to kill my cousin, but I did not it. - I had urge to kill my cousin, but I did not do it.
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