Napisałam wypracowanie o mojej siostrze z angielskiego . Proszę o sprawdzenie.. tylko nie piszcie, że wszystko ładnie dla oceny, ale naprawdę zobaczcie czy nie m błędów. Nie jestem zbyt dobra z angielskiego.. :|
Z góry dzięki, dam najlepsze. :)
My older sister Kasia is twenty one and working in a cafe near Żywiec. She's married and living in Moszczanica. She's ambitious and clever. She's friendly, helpful and nice. But sometimes she has moods. Usually she comes home once a week to visit us.
Many people says that we're similar to each other. We've both thick, straight, dark hair and brown eyes. Kasia is very tall and slim, but once not belonged to lean individuals. Both we've very pale face. We different in character. Kasia is easy to nervous, impatient and has an explosive character. I think I'm more calm and easy-going.
My sister's style since she was in my age has changed. Now often borrows me her clothes or together we go shopping and she advise me what I buy.
My older sister Kasia is twenty one and she works in a cafe near Żywiec.
She's married and living in Moszczanica-nie wiadomo jaki czas więc najlepiej:
She has got husband and she lives in Moszczanica .
But sometimes she has moods-bez sensu bo mood znaczy nastrój
Usually she comes home once a week to visit us.-zła kolejność usually wiec:
She usually visits us once a week
Many people says that we're similar to each other - many people to l. mn. wiec bez s
Many people say that we're similar to each other
Now often borrows me her clothes-powinno byc
she often borrows me her clothes now
Nie zapominaj o tych osobach przez zdaniem tak jak wyżej
po za tym dobrze