Napisałam krótkie wypracowanie z języka nagielskiego z zastosowaniem 3 czasów przeszłych : Past Simple, Past Continuous i Past Perfect. Nie jestem pewna czy jest poprawne gramatycznie. Prosze o sprawdzenie jego treści, ewntualne poprawki :)
First day in new school:
This morning I was dreaming about lovely day in new school when the alarm woke me up. I got up, ate breakfast quickly and left the house. It was raining heavly.
As I was going to the bus stop I realised that I had left my umbrella in home. I walked back and I took it. While I was crossing the road the car drove past and soaked me. I was all wet! But that wasn't the end of my terrible day.
My bus arrived half an hour late. When I finally arrived to the school the heating wasn't working so I spent the day feeling wet and cold. Finally the bell rang and I ran to the bus stop but the bus wasn't waiting in its usual place.
Suddenly I heard the voice of my Head Teacher who was coming down the stairs. He said: ""Didn't you see the notice? The bus broke down this morning". I was so angry. As i was sitting on the bus stop i realised that i left my phine on the table in the kitchen so i couldn't call to my mum. I was trying to hitch a ride (złapać stopa) when suddenly one of the cars stopped and the door opened. I saw my friend inside. I got in and we drove home. While we were coming back I told him about my terrible day.
THE First day in THE new school:
This morning I was dreaming about A lovely day in THE new school when the alarm woke me up. I got up, ate breakfast quickly and left the house. It was raining HEAVILY.
As I was going to the bus stop, I realised that I had left my umbrella AT home. I walked back and I took it. While I was crossing the road, A car drove past and soaked me. I was all wet! But that wasn't the end of my terrible day.
My bus arrived half an hour late. When I finally arrived AT the school, the heating wasn't working, so I spent the day feeling wet and cold. Finally the bell rang and I ran to the bus stop but the bus wasn't waiting in its usual place.
Suddenly I heard the voice of my Head Teacher who was coming down the stairs. He said: ""Didn't you see the notice? The bus broke down this morning". I was so angry. As I was sitting AT the bus stop, I realised that I HAD left my PHONE on the table in the kitchen so I couldn't call my mum. I was trying to hitch a ride (złapać stopa) when suddenly one of the cars stopped and the door opened. I saw my friend inside. I got in and we drove home. While we were DRIVING back, I told him about my terrible day.
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