Question

NA TERAZ! ;dd Może mi ktos sprawdzic? ;p

My favorite band is called 'Bullet for my Valentine'. The band was formed in 1998 and played under the name "Jeff Killed John '. At the beginning they made covers of Metallica and Nirvana. In 2003 the band left the bassist Nick Crandle. His place was taken by Jason James. Then the band called 'Bullet for my valentine'. Vocalist of the band is Matthew Tuck. I think he has very strong and amazing voice. „All these things i hate” is the best song of Bullets. I like „Waking the demon” and „Poison” too. Overall, the band released 3 albums, and this year plans to release next. I think their lyrics are very inspiring.

Answer 1

My favorite band is called 'Bullet for my Valentine'. The band was formed in 1998 and played under the name "Jeff Killed John '. At the beginning they made covers of Metallica and Nirvana. In 2003 the band left the bassist Nick Crandle. His place was taken by Jason James. After the band called 'Bullet for my valentine'. Vocalist of the band is Matthew Tuck. I think he has very strong and amazing voice. „All these things i hate” is the best song of Bullets. I like „Waking the demon” and „Poison”. Overall, the band released 3 albums, and this year plans to release next. I think their lyrics are very inspiring. 

pare słów zastąpiłem innymi MYŚLĘ że tak powinno być dobrze .. 

Answer 2

Według mnie powinnaś zmienić :

- The band formed in 1998

- In 2003 Nick Crandle left the band ( po prostu trochę inna kolejność)

- His place took (past simple od take )Jason James .