Question

my name is ilyas. i am an smp student at smp cakrawala. i live on jalan salak. my father's name is mr.Hariyanto.he works in a clinic.he is a doctor.my mother is a teacher at a primary school near my house.
my parents have four children.sufi, the eldest sister, she works as a programmer in private company.raihan and luthfi are my brothers. they goes to sma cakrawala.

Answer 1

Sedikit koreksi pada kalimat "i am an smp student at smp cakrawala" kata "smp" diganti dengan "junior high school", jadi kalimatnya "i am student at ckrawala junior high school"

Answer 2

Yang "they goes to sma cakrawala" jadi "they goes at cakrawala SHS (Senior high school)