Question

My favourite sport is a volleyball. Volleyball is a popular sport around the word . Volleyball is a team game sports for both men and women. Volleyball is on Olympic team sport in which two team of 6 players are separated by net. You can play it and not get bored . I like the most get under the net and break the ball . My favourite volleyball player is Mariusz Wlazły but my favourite band is " PGE Skra Bełchatów " . This team is the best in Poland I'm glad that the poles were world champions in Volleyball

PROSZĘ SPRAWDZCIE CZY WSZYSTKO JEST DOBRZE , JEŻELI UWŻACIE ŻE JEST ŹLE PO PROSZĘ NAPISZCIE :)

Answer 1

Błąd jest CHYBA w:
-Volleyball is a team game sports for both men and women- powinno byc team game for men and women ponieważ jak dasz both to będzie drużynowa gra dla obojga meższczyzn i kobiet mozesz tez napisac dla obojga plci- "for both genders" ( plec to gender wiec mnoga genders)
-"I like the most get under the net and break the ball" - najbardziej lubisz wchodzic pod siatke i niszczyc(?) pilke? tak to jest zle

Reszta chyba ok.