Miałam napisać niedługie wypracowanie, opis domu na angielski. Już je napisała jednak nie wiem czy dobrze. Zawiera on akapity. W pierwszym akapicie miałam napisać opis w skrócie, ile pomieszczeń, jakie, gdzie jest ten dom, gdzie itp. Drugi akapit opowiada o tym co teraz dzieje się w moim domu, a trzeci o moim ulubionym pokoju, ulubionych meblach itp.
My home
/I live in the small and modest house. It ist in the village Białołęka. There are ninie rooms: 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, 2 halls, dinning room, kitchen and boiler. I haven't got a living room, but my dinning room have a TV, a sofa and a bar.
/My sister is sleeping in her room now. My dad is in the bedroom. He is reading a book. My mum is in te kitchen, because she is making dinner. I'm writing this!
/My favourite room is my room, because I can stay in it same, read books, thinks about many things and listen to music. My favourite furniture in my room are a bed, commode and a infatable seat. I love this!
Co jest źle w tym tekście? Czy mogłaby jeszcze coś dodać ogólnie o domu, czy o czynnościach? Co myślicie o moim wypracowaniu?
My home
/I live in the small and modest house. It ist in the village Białołęka. There are ninie rooms: 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, 2 halls, dinning room, kitchen and boiler. I haven't got a living room, but my dinning room have a TV, a sofa and a bar.
/My sister is sleeping in her room now. My dad is in the bedroom. He is reading a book. My mum is in te kitchen, because she is making dinner. I'm writing this!
/My favourite room is my room, because I can stay in it same, read books, thinks about many things and listen to music. My favourite furniture in my room are a bed, commode and a infatable seat. I love this!
Co jest źle w tym tekście? Czy mogłaby jeszcze coś dodać ogólnie o domu, czy o czynnościach? Co myślicie o moim wypracowaniu?
nutella10
Zamiast "i can stay in it same" lepiej by było coś w stylu : "i can be alone" bo chyba o to Ci chodziło :)
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