Question

Moglibyście mi sprawdzić czy jest dobrze napisane?

It was raining, when me and my brother walked in the forest. We wanted to finded some mushrooms. Marcin have read the book for mushrooms pickers lately. So we believed that we can smething. Me and Marcin walked whole forest but our basket was been still empty. I was very upset and wanted to go home. Suddently we was hearing something. It was a very small dog! He was been hungry and frozen. My brother took him to home on his hands. We didn't find any mushrooms, bu now we have a new friend !

Answer 1

Jest dobrze, nic nie musisz poprawiać 

Answer 2

It was raining, when me and my brother walked in the forest. We wanted to find some mushrooms. Marcin have read the book for mushroom pickers lately. So we believed that we can find something. Me and Marcin walked through the whole forest but our basket was still empty. I was very upset and I wanted to go home. Suddently we heard something. It was a very small dog! He was hungry and cold. My brother took him home in his hands. We didn't find any mushrooms, bu now we have a new friend !

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