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It was dark, gloomy night. I was coming back from school the same way as usual, through the park. I was listening to music and passing a lot of people. I lost in thought and bumped into an old lady. I apologized but still behind my back I heard a quiet ‘not raised’. I turned around but this women wasn’t there. It’s impossible she’s gone so quickly! I thought ‘It’s strange’, but I was going further. To not think about that, I started taking pictures. Thanks God, I’ve got my camera. I forgot oneself and didn’t notice everybody are gone. I decided to walk towards the bus stop. With each step I felt like someone was following me. I was wondering did I lost something or not. Maybe someone found this thing and want to return me back. I turned around but again nobody was there. It started to rain. Some of the lights stopped flashing. I was so scared and started go faster. I felt great when I saw bus. I knew that nothing bad can’t happened to me then. I came back to home but that which happened didn’t go out of my head. I told about it to my sister, but she was just laughing. She said I started freaking out. I was trying to forget about it, but I couldn’t. I decided to see the pictures which I took that day. On the few photos I saw something strange, somebody was behind tree. I didn’t know what it was at all, but I thought that was ghost. I called my sister. We’ve got terrified. I turned off computer. When next day I was going to see that pictures, they weren’t. Since that day have never been in this park.
" I was so scared" lepiej będzie brzmiało bez "so" a tak to dla mnie wszystko ok
It was a dark, gloomy night. I was coming back from school the same way as usually, through the park. I was listening to music and passing a lot of people. I lost in thought and bumped into an old lady. I apologized but still behind my back I heard a quiet ‘not raised’. I turned around but this women wasn’t there. It’s impossible she’s gone so quickly! I thought ‘It’s strange’, but I was going further. To not think about that, I started taking the pictures. Thanks God, I’ve got my camera. I forgot oneself and didn’t notice everybody are gone. I decided to walk towards the bus stop. With each step I felt like someone was following me. I was wondering did I lost something or not. Maybe someone found this thing and want to return me back. I turned around but again nobody was there. It started to rain. Some of the lights stopped flashing. I was so scared and started go faster. I felt great when I saw bus. I knew that nothing bad can’t happened to me then. I came back to home but that which happened didn’t go out of my head. I told about it to my sister, but she was just laughing. She said I started freaking out. I was trying to forget about it, but I couldn’t. I decided to see the pictures which I took that day. On the few photos I saw something strange, somebody was behind tree. I didn’t know what it was at all, but I thought that was ghost. I called my sister. We’ve got terrified. I turned off computer. When next day I was going to see that pictures, they weren’t. For that day have never been in this park.