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A brave rescue
The rescue happened while I with my friends were on Winter Holiday In Italy 2 years ago. It was really amazing and brave. I managed to take a photo of the action.
We was skiing in the Alps. There were a lot of snow, and it was snowing, windy and very cold of course. We were there alone. Suddenly, we heard a scream. We looked around and saw the person who was overwhelmed by an avalanche. We ran there but we couldn’t find a person. My friend- Kaja- called for help to rescue workers. They arrived quickly. They had dogs that were looking for a person. Fortunately, they quickly found her . They took her to a stretcher , because she had a broken legs and drove to the hospital by helicopter .
The action was dangerous because the person could die under the snow, but the brave rescuers quickly found her .
A brave rescue
The rescue happened while I with my friends were on Winter Holiday In Italy 2 years ago. It was really amazing and brave. I managed to take a photo of the action.
We was skiing in the Alps. There were a lot of snow, and it was snowing, windy and very cold of course. We were there alone. Suddenly, we heard a scream. We looked around and saw the person who was overwhelmed by an avalanche. We ran there but we couldn’t find a person. My friend- Kaja- called for help to rescue workers. They arrived quickly. They had dogs that were looking for a person. Fortunately, they quickly found her . They took her to a stretcher , because she had a broken legs and drove to the hospital by helicopter .
The action was dangerous because the person could die under the snow, but the brave rescuers quickly found her .
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I with my friends were <- te were daj po I... I were with my...
We were skiing int the Alps. <- Musi być "were" bo liczba mnoga.
There were a lot of snow, and it was snowing, windy and very cold of course. -> ja bym zmienił na. It was snowing and the wind was what caused that weather wasn't pretty.
They had dogs that were looking for a person - to zdanie jest takie bezsensu. Oni mieli psa, szukali osób. Moze zmien na They had dogs who helped us with looking for a person.
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No i nigdzie nie użyty past continuous.
np; I was taking a shower when you came. - Brałem prysznic kiedy przyszedłeś.