Question

Mogłaby to sprawdzić jakaś dobra dusza??:)) WAŻNE

Dear Tanya,



It was
great to hear from you. I am writing to tell you my news!

Last month
I went on a special diet. It all started when I went to my friend’s house. She’s
a vegan. She told me that as long as she is a vegan she don’t have any problems
with her health. She have also beautiful hair. So I decided to try this diet.
Then I could eat only fruits and vegetables.



But I have
sustained just only one week. I missed fish, eggs and especially milk! I couldn’t
drink cocoa, and I couldn’t eat cereal
with milk! I was so angry. Then my friend told me about soya milk. I can eat my
favorite cereal again.

Now I’m on
third week of this diet. I have stronger nailes and healthier hair! You must
try this diet too!





Well, that’s all for now.

Kisses,

XYZ

Answer 1

Nie podoba mi się zdanie ;it was great to hear from you. Według mnie nie powinnaś pisać tego zdania bo jest ono zbędne.Natomiast reszta pracy jest poprawna pod względem gramatycznym.