Mogę prosić o sprawdzenie tego wypracowania na angielski. Jest to opis pokoju. Mogę prosić o wytłuszczenia błędów ? ''My room is small and pleasant. There are one blue wall and two yellow walls. There is dark blue fitted carpet. In my room is one white lamp but there are 4 more smaller lamps which me and my brother use to read. There are two on bed and two on desk. I share this room with my brother and that’s why there is bunk bed. There we have blue bedclothes. It’s very beautiful and durable, wooden bed which is right to door. On the left is small cabinet where I keep my table games and my favorite toys of childhood inter alia Hot Wheels. Next to the cabinet stands wardrobe which is the biggest wardrobe in my house. There is poster on wardrobe’s door. Opposite wardrobe is similar big bookcase. There are my books, comics, notebooks and school books. With my brother we have two white lockers in this bookcase. There we keep pencil case, pictures, homework… generally all school stuff . On top of bookcase are three plants but there are even my plane models and pictures. Opposite bed is my and my brother’s desk. There we do our homework. On this desk stands very small baskets. There are two sizes of baskets. In the bigger ones I keep pens and pencils, in the smaller baskets I keep my chinchilla’s brushes and keys to cage. Opposite this desk are two windows. One small is on the left and the second bigger window is on the right. There are blue blinds on windows. Under desk is my chinchilla’s cage. This cage has blue holder. It’s bigger then normal rodents cages. It has maybe even 70 cm high, one meter long or more and half meter width. There are two shelves where chinchilla has food and drink.''
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''My room is small and pleasant. Thereare one blue wall and two yellow (NIEPOTRZEBNIE POWTÓRZYŁEŚ RZECZOWNIK WALL). There is dark blue fitted carpet. In my room THERE is one white lamp AND (but- ale, and- i/a) there are 4 (LEPIEJA NAPISZ TO SŁOWEM) more smaller lamps. ME AND MY BROTHER USED TO READ BESIDE THEM (tak jak napisałeś byłoby bardzo nie po angielksu :D). There are two on A bed and two on A desk. I share this room with my brother and that’s why there is bunk bed. We have blue bedclothes THERE (niepoprawna kolejność zdania). OUR WOODEN BEDS WHICH ARE ON THE RIGHT TO A DOOR ARE very beautiful and durable (nie byłem pewien o co chodziło, więc zmieniłem). On the left THERE is small cabinet where I keep my table games and my favorite toys of childhood INCLUDING (inter alia jest równie dobre, ale to jest bardziej powszechne- wybierz, które wolisz) Hot Wheels. Next to the cabinet stands wardrobe which is the biggest ONE (aby nie powtarzać stosuje się taki zwrot, ones jeśli w liczbie mnogiej) in my house. There is poster on wardrobe’s door. Opposite wardrobe THERE is (nie może być similiar , bo wtedy trzeba dodać 'to' czyli podobne do...) big bookcase. There are my books, comics, notebooks and school books. ME AND my brother have two white lockers in this bookcase. There we keep pencil cases, pictures, homework… Generally THERE ARE all school stuff. On THE top of THE bookcase THERE are three plants AND (ta sama sytuacja co na początku- pomylone znaczenie) there are even my plane models and pictures. Opposite my bed THERE is my and my brother’s desk. We do our homeworkS THERE. On THE desk stand (nie ma większej potrzeby podkreślania wielkości tych koszyków) small baskets. There are two sizes of baskets. In the bigger ones I keep pens and pencils, in the smaller baskets I keep my chinchilla’s brushes and keys to A cage (dobrze jest napisać o jaką klatkę chodzi, bo jak na razie jest to wyrwane z kontekstu). Opposite this desk THERE are two windows. THE small ONE is on the left and the second ONE IS bigger AND IT is on the right. There are blue blinds on THE (często zapominasz dodać THE przy rzeczownikach, o których już wcześniej wspominałeś i o których wiadomo o które chodzi) windows. Under THE desk THERE (tak po prostu się pisze w angielskim, trzeba się przyzwyczaić) is my chinchilla’s cage. This cage has blue holder. It’s bigger then normal rodents cages. It has maybe even 70 cm high, one meter long or more and half meter width. There are two shelves where chinchilla has food and drink.''