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Możecie sprawdzić, czy w mailu nie ma błędów? :) Hello Anna, I write to you, because I want to tell you about something. I been at my aunt's wedding. It was 22 march this year. I helped in the making a wedding cake, because my mother is a confectioner. The cake was very big. Before the wedding we adorn the room, where was to be a wedding. We have so much fun! The wedding was amazing, and cake taste great. We was very excited. Grettings, XYZ

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Hello Anna,

I'm writting  to you, because I want to tell you about something. I were at my aunt's wedding on 22 march. I helped her with making a wedding cake, because my mother was a confectioner. The cake was very big. Before the wedding started, we adorn the room, where the wedding were going to take place. We had so much fun! The wedding was amazing, and cake tasted great. We were very excited.

Grettings, XYZ

 

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