możecie sprawdzić czy mam dobrze napisane wypracowanie na angielski (sory za małą literę na początku zdania i brak przecinków itp. to tylko wersja robocza )
one evening my friend called me. she told me that she collects people for her next project. I occurred with her before and I knew that she will create something amazing. without hesitation I said yes. the next day right after school we'd try. after the last lesson, I went to the gym where I saw at least ten people waiting for the arrival of the organizers of the project. We dance to the "they dont care about us" and "too bad" songs of Michael Jackson. when he first saw the steps, I was a little scared the layout was much more difficult than the previous one. but after a few attempts I changed my mind. We are trained two times a week for 3 or 4 hours. after such training, everyone was exhausted. We lay dead on the floor and after a few hours of dancing. the space of two weeks of severe trials my friend reported us to the dance competition "asteriada" which was to be held for two months. since then have been training more and more tiresome. and the timing of the competition was getting closer. finally came the day of a performance. when we got to the place. we started to watch the performances of professional dancers and their elaborate systems to perfection. leading eventually caused our team to the scene.
Nie ma błędów według mnie.
the gym? w sumie dala bym a gym, bo czytajacy nie wie co to za gym :D
everydoby WERE- pomimo ze was jest bardziej popularne to WERE jest poprawne ( a uwierz mi ze nawet anglicy mowia jak chca, -mowie z autopsji)
we LAID dead on the flor... (przeszlosc)
a Ogolnie to bardzo ladnie :) zebym sie chciala doszukac to nie znajde... huuahhaha :D grauluje i pozdrawiam :)