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Temat pracy: Write an essay which presents advantages and disadvantages of going on holiday with friends your own age rather than with your family. Prosiłabym też o napisaniu o wadach takiego wyjazdu.
Nowadays almost everyone teenager they want to spend their holidays with friends. Trip with friends it has more advantages it has also some drawbacks.
The first advantages is holidays with friends is that parents do not watch all the time. Moreover you will be able to do whatever you want . It can be great occasion to organise time in your own way. You will be able to go anywhere you want. First of all you can spend amazing moments in your friends.