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Miałam napisać zaproszenie dla przyjaciół na kocert jakiegoś zespołu i powiedzieć coś o ich muzyce oraz o tym dlaczego warto pójść na ten konccert. Może mi to ktoś sprawdzić??

I would like to invite you and Asia to the concert. Metallica is my favourite heavymetal band. This group still be famous in 1983. Thier first record together as a group was "Hit the Lights". After thier first big hit they had succes after succes: "One", "Stone Cold Crazy", "Better than you". I have one favourite song: "The Day That Never Comes". In this gig Metallica playing live. These concerts are fantastic, because this band makes a great show.

We are meeting on Friday May 6th in the Grand Hotel at 7p.m. Concert is going to start at 7.30p.m. We can't wait to see you and Asia!

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I would like to invite you and Asia to the concert. Metallica is my favourite heavymetal band. This group still have been famous since 1983. Their first song recorded together as a group was "Hit the Lights". After their first big hit, they successed after succes: "One", "Stone Cold Crazy", "Better than you". My favourite their song is "The Day That Never Comes". In this gig Metallica is playing live. These concerts are fantastic, because this band makes a great show.
We are meeting on Friday, 6th May, at 7 p.m. in the Grand Hotel. Concert is starting at 7.30 p.m. We can't wait to see you and Asia!
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