Question

Miałam napisać opowiadanie w czasie past simple i past countinuous. W nim na być: when(kiedy to się stało), where(gdzie to się stało), who(kto tam był),
what happend(co się tam stało tu z 2-3 rzeczy), feelings (uczucia jakie np.tobie towarzyszyły). Trochę napisałam, ale pewnie jest tu mnóstwo błędów. Proszę o poprawienie ich i dopisanie jakiś zdań, bo jest krótkie.

Last week I was in Poznań. I was with my friend. It was very exciting trip. We were in the zoo. Zoo was big. There was a lot of animals. My friend Kasia saw a spider. She started to scream. Then came the manager. He was angry. He ordered us to leave the zoo. We went for ice cream and to cinema. This film was great. Later we went to the house.

Z góry dziękuje :)

Answer 1

Last week I was in Poznań. I was with my friend. It was very exciting trip. We were in the zoo. Zoo was big. There was a lot of animals. My friend Kasia saw a spider. When she was screaming the manager entered. He was angry. He ordered us to leave the zoo. We went to cinema. We were watching a film, when man who was sitting in front of us turned and started screaming at us. He said that we threw a popcorn at him. Of course we didn't do anything like that, but we were really angry at this man so we left. We had a lot of free time and we decided to go shopping. This had improved our mood. Then we went to home.
Mam nadzieję, że będzie dobrze :).