Question

Miałam napisać opowiadanie w czasie past simple i past countinuous. W nim na być: when(kiedy to się stało), where(gdzie to się stało), who(kto tam był), what happend(co się tam stało tu z 2-3 rzeczy), feelings (uczucia jakie np.tobie towarzyszyły). Trochę napisałam, ale pewnie jest tu mnóstwo błędów. Proszę o poprawienie ich i dopisanie czegoś, bo jest krótkie.

Last week I was in Poznań. I was with my friend. It was very exciting trip. We were in the zoo. Zoo was big. There was a lot of animals. My friend Kasia saw a spider. She started to scream. Then ordered us to leave the zoo. We went for ice cream and to cinema. This film was great. Later we went to the house.

Z góry dziękuje :)

Answer 1

Last week I went to Poznań. I was there with my friend. It was a very exciting trip. We were in the zoo. This zoo was very big and there was a lot of animals. My friend My friend Kasia saw a small spider. She was scared and she started to scream. Then we left zoo, because we were tired. We went to the cinema. Film was great. Later we came back to the house.

Poprawiłam i możliwe, że coś dodałam czy coś. Myślę, że jest w porządku, ale powinno byc ok ;)