Me pueden ayudar a corregir esta historia por favor? A Month ago i went to el garañon wich my Friends i played to Football. After i had visited el Roque nublo . In the Roque nublo i was eating a sándwiches and i saw a Body desform wich the face convered.only i just saw it. No one i believed . I was afraid in then moment.after was went to the cabin and was Not my meat. I was planning that was the Body desform wich the face convered That Night we was speaking about the estrange Body and Also about Mistery stories . While i was eating potatoes because There wasn't meat and finally we went to the cabin to sleep and Not step out nothing the foreign Body was Breathing me.... In the morning There was no food. Was the strange Body.... in afternoon we went to investigate about the case We entered the cave Was the strange body He was a Men. He was wont to investigate about the case. De entered in the cave Was the strange Body. He was a Men. He was eating a los of food Was a beggan : We were speakin wich he. He never studied Because He Not wanted He never work and Don't Had Money
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A month ago, i went to "El garañon" with my friends and I. We play soccer, after we visit "El roque nublo". I ate a sanwich, and saw a desform body and only his face covered. NO one believed that I saw it. I was afraid at the time. Then we went to the cabin and it wasn't my meat. I was thinking that it was the desform body with the face covered, in that night that my friends and i were talking about suspense stories. While i was eating potatoes, because of the mistery of the meat. Finally we went to the cabin to sleep and not get crazy about the desform body. The next morning there was no food. We really thought about the desform body. In the afternoon we went to investigate, because we wasn't sure. So we got into a cave, and it was the strange desform body. It was a men. It was him. He was eating all of our food, all of it. We were speaking and he told us he never studied because he didn't want to, he never want to work and of course he has no money because he was a dull. So now we know we have to study
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