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Prosze o szybkie sprawdzenie. PILNE!

Kryteria

-określ cel , napisz jak dowiedziałeś sie o stypendium

-opisz krotko wykształcenie i poziom znajomości angielskiego

-wyjaśnij jak długo i dlaczego interesujesz się Szkocja

-Przekonaj organizatorów ze zasługujesz na stypendium [2 arg]

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing with regard to your advertisement on scholarship which appeared in from a local newspaper.

I am a student of Unversity in Łodź the Department of English history. I graduated from high school in Warsaw with distinction. I speak English fluently.

The scholarship is important for me because I can not afford to pay for school myself . I would like to focus on learning because it is very time consuming and I can not work while I am studying. Moreover, I am interested in Scottish culture. I love painting and literary works.

I think I am a suitable candidate for this scholarship because I fulfill all acceptance criteria that can be found on the website. I have additional achievements in English contests of whom I am very proud. I am interested in English, which helped me to win precious experience. I am the most proud of winning many English competitions.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

XYZ

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing with regard to your advertisement OF scholarship which appeared in  a local newspaper.

I am a student of Unversity in Łodź the Department of English history. I graduated from high school in Warsaw with distinction. I speak English smoothly.

The scholarship is important for me because I can not afford to pay for school myself . I would like to focus on learning because it is HIGH time consuming and I can not work while studying. Moreover, I am interested in Scottish culture. I love painting and literary works.

I think I am a suitable candidate for this scholarship because I fulfill all acceptance criteria that can be found on the website. I have additional achievements in English contests of whom I am very proud. I am interested in English, which helped me to win precious experience. I am very proud of winning many English competitions.



I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

XYZ

 

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