Kto sprawdzi mój list ? mam 133 slow ,a chyba powinno byc 120 mozecie mi pomoc ,ktore zdanie ,wyrazy moglabym skasowac ? Jest to list na jezyk obcy zawodowy dlatego musi byc jak najwiecej o informatyce. Licze na Wasza pomoc!:))
Dear Sir/ Madam My name is XYZ. I am writing to apply for the position of a computer programmer advertised in the Warsaw News on 15th May 2009. I have been studying information technology in Warsaw University in 2006. I finished it with distinction. For the last holiday I have been working as a meanager in London so I have a lot of experience. I feel I am a suitable candidate the position computer programmer because I have good computer skills. I know many programming languages such as Turbo Pascal, Java, C++ and Visual Basic. In addition I am very hard-working, organized and responsible. I am available for an interview at any time convenient for you. I enclose a copy of my CV and my references. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully.
VandaL10
Powinno być 120-150.....mieścisz sie w przedziale.....wszytsko jest ok:)