last new year's eve , my family joined some other families on a fishing trip at greenwich harbor to welcome new year . we went fishing so we could step up late. on our way to the harbor ,we bought some beef mince at the butcher's . we used the mince as bait . my parents' friends brought the fishing rods for us to use . when we got the harbor ,some families were already there . we were a bit late because we tried to find our way to the harbor and got a bit lost . we started fishing competitio . we agreed that who ever got the most fish will keep all fish caught that night.apparently ,no one caught by big fish . we caught mostly small yellow tail fish . after fishing for nearly theere hours , my mom got the most fish . All the participants gave all their fish to us . we came home with a bucketful of fish . it was not bad at all . the next morning , we enjoyed fresh fried yellow tail fish with steamed rice for breakfast . that was very special because we had never had fried yellow tail fish for breakfast before
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AyumuOrientation: Last new year's eve , my family joined some other families on a fishing trip at Greenwich harbor to welcome new year.
Event: We went fishing so we could step up late. On our way to the harbor, we bought some beef mince at the butcher's. We used the mince as bait. My parents' friends brought the fishing rods for us to use. When we got the harbor, some families were already there. We were a bit late because we tried to find our way to the harbor and got a bit lost. We started fishing competition. We agreed that who ever got the most fish will keep all fish caught that night. Apparently, no one caught by big fish. We caught mostly small yellow tail fish. After fishing for nearly three hours, my mom got the most fish. All the participants gave all their fish to us. We came home with a bucketful of fish. It was not bad at all. The next morning , we enjoyed fresh fried yellow tail fish with steamed rice for breakfast.
Re-orientation: That was very special because we had never had fried yellow tail fish for breakfast before.
Oke, semoga membantu :D....perlu di break-down lagi eventnya?
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event 1: we went.........mostly small yellow tail fish.
event 2: After fishing for.......steamed rice for breakfast
menurut saya begitu sih, kecuali cerintanya berparagraf, itu lebi enak lagi ditentukan strukturnya.
FionaCitraOrientation : Last new year's eve , my family joined some other families on a fishing trip at Greenwich harbor to welcome new year.
Event : We went fishing so we could step up late. On our way to the harbor, we bought some beef mince at the butcher's. We used the mince as bait. My parents' friends brought the fishing rods for us to use. When we got the harbor, some families were already there. We were a bit late because we tried to find our way to the harbor and got a bit lost. We started fishing competition. We agreed that who ever got the most fish will keep all fish caught that night. Apparently, no one caught by big fish. We caught mostly small yellow tail fish. After fishing for nearly three hours, my mom got the most fish. All the participants gave all their fish to us. We came home with a bucketful of fish. It was not bad at all. The next morning , we enjoyed fresh fried yellow tail fish with steamed rice for breakfast.
Reorientation : That was very special because we had never had fried yellow tail fish for breakfast before.
Last new year's eve , my family joined some other families on a fishing trip at Greenwich harbor to welcome new year.
Event:
We went fishing so we could step up late. On our way to the harbor, we bought some beef mince at the butcher's. We used the mince as bait. My parents' friends brought the fishing rods for us to use. When we got the harbor, some families were already there. We were a bit late because we tried to find our way to the harbor and got a bit lost. We started fishing competition. We agreed that who ever got the most fish will keep all fish caught that night.
Apparently, no one caught by big fish. We caught mostly small yellow tail fish. After fishing for nearly three hours, my mom got the most fish. All the participants gave all their fish to us. We came home with a bucketful of fish. It was not bad at all. The next morning , we enjoyed fresh fried yellow tail fish with steamed rice for breakfast.
Re-orientation:
That was very special because we had never had fried yellow tail fish for breakfast before.
Oke, semoga membantu :D....perlu di break-down lagi eventnya?
Last new year's eve , my family joined some other families on a fishing trip at Greenwich harbor to welcome new year.
Event :
We went fishing so we could step up late. On our way to the harbor, we bought some beef mince at the butcher's. We used the mince as bait. My parents' friends brought the fishing rods for us to use. When we got the harbor, some families were already there. We were a bit late because we tried to find our way to the harbor and got a bit lost. We started fishing competition. We agreed that who ever got the most fish will keep all fish caught that night.
Apparently, no one caught by big fish. We caught mostly small yellow tail fish. After fishing for nearly three hours, my mom got the most fish. All the participants gave all their fish to us. We came home with a bucketful of fish. It was not bad at all. The next morning , we enjoyed fresh fried yellow tail fish with steamed rice for breakfast.
Reorientation :
That was very special because we had never had fried yellow tail fish for breakfast before.
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