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I took a back seat and sipped my drink while enjoying the goings on. All the kids had a good time while all the mothers and teachers had headaches. After some time, the mothers got tired and dragged their kids home. "What spoil sports!" I thought. As for me, i stayed until tina had enough. By the time she was too tired to walk and i had to carry her home. She slept all the way on my shoulders. I felt like a mother. It was a beautiful feeling.

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Answer 1

Aku menduduki bangku belakang dan meneguk minumku seraya menikmati sekitar. Semua anak mendapat saat yang menyenangkan ketika para ibu dan guru - guru mendapatkan sakit kepala. Setelah beberapa lama, ibu - ibu mulai lelah dan menyeret anak - anak mereka pulang. "Mengesalkan!" pikirku. Sedangkan aku, aku tetap disana hingga Tina merasa cukup. Ketika ia sudah terlalu lelah untuk berjalan aku harus menggendongnya pulang. Dia tidur sepanjang jalan di bahuku. Aku merasa seperti seorang ibu. Itu adalah perasaan yang indah.

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This story is beautifully written and the caring relationship between the protagonist and Tina is just lovely. But, I think it would be better if they had shown Tina's feelings about the day. Overall, this is a great story.