Jutro muszę przedstawić tą historię. Sprawdzicie poprawność? Hello Students and Teachers! My name is Patryk, and today, I’m going to tell you mystery story about our school. Yesterday, when everybody’s leaved a school, our English teacher, XYZ , had strange adventure. She was closing the door. She’s end work. She was in staffroom, when she heard cracking noise. “God”-she thought- :What was happening?” At this moment lights turned out. She heard loud scream. “He-hello?”- she said, but no one answer. She leaved staffroom. At the end of corridor she saw a kind of a shadow. It was running to her. She started screaming. Stranger was still running to her. He stole her tests. Lights turned on. “Where’s my tests?”- she said. “I’am leaving this job!!!! This place is haunted!” Nobody knows what was happened. English teacher is still working in our school. Cameras didn’t register only this short moment. Ghosts?
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Hello Students and Teachers! My name is Patryk, and today I’m going to tell you mysterious story about our school. Yesterday, when everybody leaved the school, our English teacher XYZ , had strange adventure. She was closing the door after she ended her work. She was in staffroom, when she heard dreadful noise. “God”-she thought- :What was happening?” In this moment someone switched off the lights . She heard loud scream. “He-hello?”- she said, but no one answered. She leaved staffroom. At the end of corridor she saw the kind of a shadow. It was running towards her. She started screaming. Stranger was still approaching her. He stole her tests. Lights were turned on again. “Where are my tests?”- she said. “I’am leaving this job!!!! This place is haunted!” Nobody knows what happened. The english teacher is still working in our school. Cameras didn’t record only this short moment. Ghosts?