Question

Jak możecie sprawdzcie czy ten tekst jest dobry. To jest praca na jutro. Będe wdzięczny jeżeli ktoś poprawi błędy.
Tekst dotyczy szkoły w przyszłości. Mam użć czasu przyszłęgo prostego z will i won't. Jeżeli ktoś ma pomysł może napisać włąsną wersję ;)

I think that schools in the future will disappeared, because students will use computers to study in house. They won't get up early and they won't be stressed before tests. Students will use special websites where they can choose lessons and subjects. Teachers will give homework in the Internet. Lessons won't be bored, but they will be more interesting. Students will chat wich teachers or talk by skype. Pupils won't have many friends because they won't to meet with people.

Answer 1

I think that schools in the future will disappear, because students will use computers to study at home (wydaje mi się że tak powinno być bo jest takie wyrażenie home schooling a nie hous schooling, ale tu nie jestem na 100 % pewna). They won't get up early and they won't be stressed before tests. Students will use special websites where they can choose lessons and subjects. Teachers will give homework by the Internet. Lessons won't be as boringas they are now. They will be more interesting. Students will chat with teachers or talk by skype. Pupils won't have many friends because they won't be able to meet them at school.

To co poprawiłam dałam w pogrubionej czciące, ogólnie tekst jest bardzo fajny. Tego co jest w nawiasie nie pisz ;p

 

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