I came to San Andreas from Liberty City. My parents are passed away because whole criminals robbed our house and kidnapped them. I was live with my brother, and at a time, my brother dead for lung cancer because he always puffs the lighted cigarettes, like four packs of cigarettes in a day. Because I got nothing and only have a gold from my parents, I decided to sell it and buy some seeds and grow them to get weeds. At a time, there is a criminal group want to buy my weeds and then I sold my weeds. Then, I moved to San Andreas, and now I continued my criminal life and now I live in a small house on Verona Beach. Until now, i am working with drugs and sell it to keep my relationship between other groups.
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I moved to San Andreas from Liberty City. My parents passed away because some criminals kidnapped them after robbing our house. I lived with my brother and at the same time he died due to lung cancer because he always smoked and spent four packs of cigarretes a day. Because I got nothing but jewelry from my parents, I decided to sell it and bought some seeds and grew them to get weeds. Once there was a criminal group wanted to buy my weeds and I sold it them. Then, I moved to San Andreas and I continued my criminal life. Now I live in a small house on Verona Beach. Until now, I am working with drugs and sell them to keep my relationship with other groups.
I moved to San Andreas from Liberty City. My parents passed away because some criminals kidnapped them after robbing our house. I lived with my brother and at the same time he died due to lung cancer because he always smoked and spent four packs of cigarretes a day. Because I got nothing but jewelry from my parents, I decided to sell it and bought some seeds and grew them to get weeds. Once there was a criminal group wanted to buy my weeds and I sold it them. Then, I moved to San Andreas and I continued my criminal life. Now I live in a small house on Verona Beach. Until now, I am working with drugs and sell them to keep my relationship with other groups.