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Hola el lunes tengo que exponer un topic osea el project el texto ya lo he escrito pero no se si tiene fallos o no alguien me puede revisar el texto y decirme que errores tengo o darmelo ya corregido aqui os dejo el texto:


Hello my name is Yasmín. Today I am going to speak on my 2 favorite animals of my house. My dog and my hamster.
I am going to begin for my dog, maxi, called this way by a supermarket, the name is graceful enough. In my house we call it of many forms Maximiliano, Maximilian, mixiomono, maybe or maximino. My dog was born the same day that my mother, though in the different years, it was born on January 1, 2013. Maxi is a very active dog, sinceme, her owner. It goes out of walk every day, during an hour except the weekends, which it I walk for two hours.
In February it goes of hunt with my father and with me, on Thursdays, Friday, Saturdays and Sundays. It is charmed with to him, for the adrenaline. It has very good ear and when it wants to center, raises the ears and remains still and quiet. So much energy is recharged by food; he eats food for dogs, in concrete it finalizes adults; he does not like this food anything, for which the landlady the persons' food, but it(he,she) is not healthy for; for it I prepare for him a type of domestic food for dogs. When I do not prepare this food for him it becomes sad and lies down without doing anything or goes out to the balcony and continues looking at the city. My dog likes much that it caresses him and he delights that it does photos to him, bony, the reputation for my is the best dog of the world.

Now I go to speak about my hamster, vaquita, call like that for his white and black spots since it is a hamster panda, a very nice species . Also we call it hasti. It is everything opposite to my dog, is very active, since me, but very sleep, for any site is good to sleep, inside his wheel, behind his small house or even inside his food. Also she is charmed with eating, since ,nevertheless it does very much exercise, also like I. His food is a fodder for hamster, but the only thing that he eats they are a few small black pipes, turn him madman and though it is strange he does not like at all the vegetables he is a chubby person. When the lame thing does not remain still, for what it is very difficult to do photos to him, hedoes not like the reputation. It is very fondness though, with badly character, especially when the awake of his siesta.
por favor es super urgente os lo pido de corazon

Answer 1

Ammm... yo no le encontre errores si lo pronuncias bien

Answer 2

Yo no he encontrado ningun error