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Hi Xyz

Last weekend, together with his colleague and friend was in the cinema at a very good film, Skyfall''. I like my friends so I went with them to the cinema. We are having a great time. The film I really liked. amazed me special effects and a great plot. It tells of secret agent James Bond. Certainly, the film is very good and I recommend it to you.

XYZ

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Answer 1

... 'together with HIS colleague and friend' - nie wiem co miałes na mysli
napisałbym: Last weekend I went to the cinema with my friends. We looked a very good film called 'Skyfall'.

 

kolejne zdanie jest ok, ale trochę bez sensu ;)

"I've known my mates for ages so I often go out with them because they are really funny and friendly people."

(Znam moich kumpli od wieków wiec czesto wychodzę z nimi, bo są to naprawdę zabawni i przyjacielscy ludzie.)

 

We ARE having a great time. nie,  nie - to czas terazniejszy 

mozesz napisać : We had a great time.

 

: I enjoyed that film. I was impressed by special effects and a great plot. 

 

 

Answer 2

Last weekend I went with my best friend and his mate to the cinema to see a very good movie 'Skyfall'.  We really like to spend time with each otcher so we went altogether and we were having great time. I loved that movie immediately because of special effects and great plot. The movie is about secret agent called James Bond. I recommend you this movie.

 

(colleague- kolega z pracy;  mate- kolega ze szkoły)