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Hi Tom!

How are you?

I'm sorry I haven't written for such a long time.

I know you are interested in art, so we would go an exhibition at this weekend. This exhibition is about our local artist. We will meetwith our the best artist. If you like to paint a picture you can bring it, and the best picture will gibbet on exhibition. Shall we go on this exhibition? It's a very nice local show. I hope everything is well with you Tom !

See you soon !

Karol ________________________________________________

Proszę o poprawę drobnych błędów itp, żeby miało ręce i nogi. Nie ma to być oczywiscie formalna wersja.Bardzo będe wdzięczny za pomoc. :))

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Hi Tom!

How are you? I'm sorry that I haven't written for a long time.

I know you are interested in art, so I have a question for you. Would you go to an art exhibition at this weekend? This exhibition is about our local artist. We will meet with our the best artist. If you like to painting you can bring some of your works, they will choose the best picture and it will be added to exhibition. So, would go on it? It's a very nice local show and I'm sure that you will have a good time on it.

I hope everything is well with you Tom !

See you soon !

Karol

 

W niektórych miejscach uzupełniłam, niektóre zmieniłam i częściowo coś dodałam od siebie w stylu" jak ja bym to zrobiła" mam nadzijeję że sie nie gniewasz ;)