Question

Hi,
I'm in Warsaw. I took part in a sporting event - Independence Run- edition 2013. I'm here because I love running and I am very good at it.
For first, second or third place, you can win medals or trophies, and for the next places are consolation prizes. I always had fourth place and got a consolation prize in the form of a bear. The most I like the atmosphere of the event. People are fun to play and do not compete for places.
What are you doing tomorrow? I'm going to go to the theatre with Janet.We're going to show Fri,, Romeo and Juliet'' I want to see it right now!
See you soon,
XYZ
Sprawdźcie moją pocztówkę i ile słów zawiera. Powinna zawierać 80-130 słów, a na poziomie rozszerzonych 200-250 słów. Ja jestem na rozszerzeniu.

Answer 1

I'm in Warsaw. I took a part in a sport event - Independence Run edition 2013.
Im here because i love running and I am very good at it.
For first, second or third place, you can win medals or trophies. For next places are consoling prizes. I always had fourth place and always I've been receiving prize in the form of a bear. I like the most an atmosphere of this event. People are kind and funny, they do what they love and dont compete for an awards. What are you doing tommorrow? I'm going to go to the theatre with Janet. We're going to show Fri,, Romeo and Juliet" I want to see it right now!
See you soon, 
XYZ.

Poprawiłem błędy i pozmieniałem, liczę na naj ;) a co do ilości słów to jest ok. ewentualnie jak chcesz to możesz jeszcze dopisać parę zdań.

Answer 2

Albo źle policzylem albo masz niż 200
mniej