Question

Hey! Możecie mi to sprawdzić czy dobrze napisałam? Tzn czy dobrze gramatycznie i czy ogólnie takie logiczne zdania, wiecie o co chodzi :) Daje naj.

My favourite film is "The Notebook". This is the story of two people; Allie and her husband Noah. Allie lives in a nursing home. She doesn't remember the events of the past, family. Noah didn't give up and tries to help her recouver lost memories. Every day, he again tells the stories of their lives. One night, he gets a heart attack and wants to spend the last moments with Allie. He goes to talk to her. She the first time in years, remembers him, happy to fall asleep forever. This film was a very moving. Showed that together we can defeat all the hardship. All people should learn from Allie and Noah. This movie is definitely worth seeing.

Answer 1

Oczywiście , że tak , a gdyby nie to się nie przejmuj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 2

Wydaje mi się że masz wszystko ok pod względem gramatyki jak i spójności. oczywiście mogę się mylić