Question

HEJ!;D MOŻECIE MI SPRAWDZIĆ CZY DOBRZE NAPISAŁAM E-MAIL PO ANGIELSKU ??? NIE MA ŻADNYCH BŁĘDÓW??
Hi Ania! I've just moved into my new home in Warsaw. It is a very comfortable place for me , I think .Okolica is very peaceful and safe . Near my neighborhood there are coffee shop, supermarket , bus stop and a cinema and a large library ! I live in a beautiful villa in the middle of a luxurious and beautiful as a palace !
There are cozy and luxurious .
The ground floor has a large kitchen with dining room, modern lounge with large windows and a fireplace , next to a staircase leading to the first floor piętro na find my bedroom with separate bathroom .
I hope you visit me soon .
I'm waiting for your letter! See you!

zastanawiam się czy nie wstawić zaniast willa na luksusowa rezydencja = mansion

Answer 1

Hi Ania! I've just moved into my new home (napisałabym house. Home to bardziej rodzina, a house - budynek) in Warsaw. I think that Okolica is very peaceful and safe. This is also a very comfortable place for me, because there are many interesting places in my neighborhood. For instance, there is a cafe, a supermarket, a bus stop and (skreśl) a cinema and a large library ! Dopełnij: np. thanks to this fact I can spend my afternoons in nice ways. I live in a beautiful villa in the middle of a luxurious and beautiful as a palace ! ta część jest niezrozumiała
There are cozy and luxurious... kiedy piszesz przymiotniki, musisz dodać min. jeden podmiot
The ground floor has a large kitchen with dining room, modern lounge with large windows and a fireplace , next to a staircase leading to the first floor piętro na find my bedroom with separate bathroom . Rozbij to na 2-3 zdania
I hope that you will visit me soon .
I'm waiting for your letter! See you!

Ogólnie dobrze :)
W razie wątpliwości, napisz do mnie

Answer 2

Ja bym to: It is a very comfortable place for me , I think zamieniła na to: I think that is a very comfortable place for me

a okolica, obszar  to area

a pod całością napisałabym: Kisses, i oczywiście musisz podpisać XYZ