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Dear Dominica,
Thank you for your letter that I received last week. I’m pleased to hear that everything is well with you and that you already have got a job. I’m very sorry that I haven’t replied to your letter earlier but I’ve had much work.
I want to tell you so much. First of all you should know that I have a big surprise for you. Did you know that Sandra is going to marry Rafała? They told me that two days ago. They were both very happy and I saw they really love each other. Wedding ceremony will be in August. I’m going to buy a new dress, especially for this occasion. I hope you'll be able to join us. I'm looking forward to our meeting.
I was wondering if you’d like to go on holiday with us? Could you let me know? I wish you good luck your driving test. Don’t worry, I’m sure you’ll you can handle this.
That’s all I wanted to say. I promise to be in touch with you. Say hello to your sister and write to me as soon as possible.
Best wishes,
XYZ
Dear Dominica,
Thank you for your letter WHICH I received last week. I’m pleased to hear that everything is well with you and that you HAVE already got a job. I’m very sorry that I haven’t replied to your letter earlier but I’ve had SO much work.
I want to tell you A LOT. First of all you should know that I have a big surprise for you. Did you know that Sandra is going to GET MARRIED WITH Rafał? They told me THIS two days ago. They BOTH WERE very happy and I saw they ARE really IN love WITH each other. Wedding ceremony will be in August. I’m going to buy a new dress, especially for this occasion. I hope you'll be able to join us. I'm looking forward to our meeting.
I was wondering if you’d like to go on holiday with us? Could you let me know? I wish you good luck your driving test. Don’t worry, I’m sure you’ll you chandle this.
That’s all I wanted to say. I promise to be in touch with you. Say hello to your sister and write to me as soon as possible.
Best wishes,
XYZ