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Three years ago, when I was on holiday in the countryside at my grandma, I survived the very exciting adventure.
I with my friends Marta, Iga and Iza went to the forest to the clearing. We must completed building our treehouse. Over work we told scared stories about werewolfs.When we finished wes 9 p.m and the sky turned dark. Grandma's house was located 1km from the forest. We went very quickly because we was afraid after our stories. After 20 minutes we listened how some animal neared to us. We was very scared. We was confident that It was very big werewolf, who wanted to ate us. The animal was nearer and nearer! We climbed a tree. When monster was under the tree , I come of the ground. I was very afraid! The animal bowed over me. I saw terrible eyes and I was confident that the werewolf wanted to ate me! But instead sharp clows, I felt warm, soft nose on my face. When I standed up I saw my grandma's dog! Rex set out for search. He is good dog!
We got back to countryside and we told everything.
Three years ago, when I was on holiday in the countryside at my grandma, I survived the very exciting adventure.
I with my friends Marta, Iga and Iza went to the forest to the clearing. We must completed building our treehouse. Over work we told scared stories about werewolfs.When we finished wes 9 p.m and the sky turned dark. Grandma's house was located 1km from the forest. We went very quickly because we was afraid after our stories. After 20 minutes we listened how some animal neared to us. We was very scared. We was confident that It was very big werewolf, who wanted to ate us. The animal was nearer and nearer! We climbed a tree. When monster was under the tree , I come of the ground. I was very afraid! The animal bowed over me. I saw terrible eyes and I was confident that the werewolf wanted to ate me! But instead sharp clows, I felt warm, soft nose on my face. When I standed up I saw my grandma's dog! Rex set out for search. He is good dog!
We got back to countryside and we told everything.
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