Question

Hej, mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić list nieformalny? Są jakieś błędy? Z góry dziękuję :)

Dear Harry,



My name's XYZ and I'm 16 years old. I
live in Leszno, in Poland with my mum, dad and grandmother. I've got
two older brothers. They are called Łukasz and Mateusz.




I've got loads of interests. I'm into
taking pictures. I also like animals. I've got a dog called Coffee. I
love listening to music, especially rock. I love singing too.




Can you tell me something about the
town I'm going to stay in? Is it a big city? What can we do there?
Are there any interesting places where we can go?



I've already packed my stuff. I checked
weather forecast and it's going to be sunny! I'm very excited about
this trip. Who will pick me up from the airport?
See you soon.
Best wishes,
XYZ

Answer 1

Nie masz żadnych błędów ale radziła bym ci to na pisać tak:
My name is Oliwia. I am 13 years. My mum is vet. My father is a taxi driver. My favourite friend is Weronika. I like sushi, pavlova and moussaka. I don't like spaghetti, pizza and pancake. Her favourite place is a cinema....................
Tak naprawdę się tak nie nazywam i to nie są prawdziwe informacje ale pomogłam

Answer 2

I've got LOADS of intersts. - Moim zdaniem powinno być LOTS OF
I'm into taking pictures - Nie wiem co chciałeś/aś tu powiedzieć, ale to jest nielogiczne...
Are there any interesting places where we can go? - druga część pytania powinna chyba brzmieć WHERE CAN WE GO? aczkolwiek nie jestem tego pewna.. 

reszta jest spoko :)