Question

Hej. CzY MÓGŁBY KTOŚ SPRAWDZIĆ CZY DOBRZE NAPISAŁAM?
My avatar is a woman. She is lean and low. She her long, red hair. Her hair is (proste). She's got black eyes. She's wearing glasses. She's wearing a cream-colored shirt, green shirt, pink short and creamy shoes. She was wearing a pink headband with cream bow. In her hand she holds umbrella. It also has on his neck a necklace and a bracelet on your wrist

Answer 1

My avatar is a woman. She is lean and SHORT. She HAS long, red hair. SHE HAS STRAIGHT HAIR. She's got black eyes. She IS wearING glasses. She HAS a cream-colored shirt, A green shirt AND pink creamy shoes. She IS WEARING A pink headband with A cream bow. In her hand she IS holdING AN  umbrella. SHE also HAS  a necklace and a bracelet on HER wrist.
( neklace jak nazwa wskazuje nosi się na szyi, więc nie trzeba dodawać gdzie )