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Hi, my name is Laura, I live with my parents and my brother. His name is Adam. He is thirteen years old. He was born in June and I was born in March 21st. My birthday is on Saturday. I will be sixteen years old. So, let me tell you about what I’d like to do on my birthday. I’m going to get up at 7:30 in the morning, then take a shower, and have breakfast at 8:00. After that, I’m going to brush my teeth and get ready to wait for my friends. I invited my friends at school last week to come over and have some fun all day long on Saturday. We’re planning to go rollerblading. We will arrive there at 10:00 o’clock. We’re going to spend about two hours there. Then at 12:00 noon we’re going bowling and have lunch in the new mall. After bowling, we’re going to visit an aquarium. Next around 5:00 o’clock we’re going to a go-kart track near the aquarium. We’re going to race and have lots of fun! Finally, when we get home in the evening mom is going to have ready a delicious dinner and a chocolate cake! Isn’t it awesome?
Hi, my name is Laura, I live with my parents and my brother. His name is Adam. He is thirteen years old. He was born in June and I was born in March 21st. My birthday is on Saturday. I will be sixteen years old. So, let me tell you about what I’d like to do on my birthday. I’m going to get up at 7:30 in the morning, then take a shower, and have breakfast at 8:00. After that, I’m going to brush my teeth and get ready to wait for my friends. I invited my friends at school last week to come over and have some fun all day long on Saturday. We’re planning to go rollerblading. We will arrive there at 10:00 o’clock. We’re going to spend about two hours there. Then at 12:00 noon we’re going bowling and have lunch in the new mall. After bowling, we’re going to visit an aquarium. Next around 5:00 o’clock we’re going to a go-kart track near the aquarium. We’re going to race and have lots of fun! Finally, when we get home in the evening mom is going to have ready a delicious dinner and a chocolate cake! Isn’t it awesome?
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I’m going to wake up at 7:30 in the morning, then take a shower, and have breakfast at 8:00.
Isn’t that awesome?
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