¿Es este poema apto para una antología?
Estoy escribiendo una antología para mi clase de Literatura, y quería saber si este poema es lo suficientemente decente como para un libro serio. Gracias
What made me think this one would last?
What made me think it wouldn't be gone in a blast?
Yeah, he made me believe in friendship
Yeah, he made me believe in love
But there's nothing left anymore
I've lost the one I used to adore
What's the point of society?
Whenever you trust you get betrayed
With your soul impregned with anxiety
Feeling used, feeling played
Will we ever be restricted?
Will this someday be over?
Or will we keep hurting each other
In our own prison of growing rage convicted
Here's an advice for the future
For everyone who has a friend
For everyone with befriending intent
Do not trust anyone; those wounds can't be sutured
Estoy escribiendo una antología para mi clase de Literatura, y quería saber si este poema es lo suficientemente decente como para un libro serio. Gracias
What made me think this one would last?
What made me think it wouldn't be gone in a blast?
Yeah, he made me believe in friendship
Yeah, he made me believe in love
But there's nothing left anymore
I've lost the one I used to adore
What's the point of society?
Whenever you trust you get betrayed
With your soul impregned with anxiety
Feeling used, feeling played
Will we ever be restricted?
Will this someday be over?
Or will we keep hurting each other
In our own prison of growing rage convicted
Here's an advice for the future
For everyone who has a friend
For everyone with befriending intent
Do not trust anyone; those wounds can't be sutured
XD8765
Esta Bien para un libro esta bien
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Sofigaby
Un libro serio? Así como para llevarlo a una casa editorial?
XD8765
si
XD8765
claro porque no? :p
Sofigaby
LOL Muchas gracias :)
XD8765
de nada :b
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