Question

Dobrze napisałam wypracowanie z angielskiego n o moim drzewie genealogicznym? nie będę go rysować w paincie, bo chodzi o to, czy ta praca dla Was, którzy nie znacie mojej rodziny, będzie dla was zrozumiała. ;D

It’s my family tree! On top of this tree are my grandparents: Edward and Zdzisław are my grandfathers, and Maria and Rozalia are my grandmothers. My grandfathers an my one grandmothers – Maria died. Maria and Edward are parents of my mother, and Maria and Zdzisław are parents of my father. Maria and Zdzisław have got two children: my mum, and Danuta. My mum’s name is Jolanta, and she is a sister for my aunt – Danuta. Them, Danuta married Mark, and they have three children. Their names are: Daniel, Mirosław and Marika. Daniel is the oldest and youngest is Marika. They are cousins for me, and my sisters. Marika is the niece for my mom, and Mirek and Daniel - nephews.

My others grandparents, Zdzisław and Rozalia, have got seven children! Their names are: Piotr, Przemysław, Arleta, Katarzyna, Andrzej, Wojciech, and Teresa. Andrzej, Wojciech and Teresa died before I was born. The oldest is my dad - Piotr. Then, Przemysław and Arleta. Przemysław and Arleta are twins, and the youngest is Katarzyna. Przemysław, married Maria with whom he has three children: Dominika, Sara, and Karol. They are cousins for me. Dominika is the oldest, and Karol is the youngest. However, Arleta married Robert. They have got two children: Klaudia and Dagmara. Klaudia ist oldest than Dagmara, and she has got a husband – Artur. He’s very nice! Finally, Katarzyna’s husband names is Hubert, and they have got two children: Nicole and Szymon. They are a cousins for me, and I like them very much.

Finally, my mother married my father – Piotr. They have got two children – Beata, Daria and me. Beata is oldest, and I’m the youngest.

I love my family, because everyone is nice.

Jak jakieś błędy czy uwagi - pisać ;D

Z góry thx.. ;***

Answer 1

pierwszy wers: On the top of this tree there are my grandparents.

i ostatnie zdanie : i love my family because everyone respect each other and the love each other. I like spending time with them.    

 

lepiej tak napisac a ogolnie to liczna rodzinka 7 dzieci wow ;] pozdrawiam

Answer 2

On the  top of this tree are my grandparents: my grandfathers : Edward and Zdzisław, my grandmothers: Maria and Rozalia. My grandfathers an my one grandmothers – Maria died.

Maria and Zdzisław has got two children: my mum, and Danuta.

Danuta married Mark, and they have three children.

Daniel is the oldest, and the  youngest is Marika.

Marika is the niece for my mom,but Mirek and Daniel - nephews.

Klaudia is older than Dagmara, and she has got a husband – Artur.

Finally, Katarzyna husband names is Hubert, and they has got two children: Nicole and Szymon.

They have got three children – Beata, Daria and me.

Beata is the oldest, and I’m the youngest.