Question

Do sprawdzenia, bo zapewne jest tu wiele błędów :p ale jednak proooszę o poprawienie. :)

It was sunny, summer, beautiful day. Was 12 o'clock. Justin and Mark have holiday, so they daecide going to mountains. They take knife, tent, torch, rope, eat and water. After hour travel they saw beautiful, high tops and climbing on them peoples. Justin and Mark choose the most difficult and dangerous top. When they climbed on the way Justin saw a lot of warnings. Justin and Mark climbed 2 hour, when suddenly started rain and storm came. Men's decide to come dow when heard shout a young woman. They decide check what going on. They saw women. She hanging, she was scary and frightened. She have accident when she climbed. The weather was starting worst. Temperature fall down below zero. The situation was very dangerous and frightened. When the darkneed they reach for her and they must cut the rope and rescue her. When Justin and Mark come down with Betty, she saw that the get hurt. Men's help her and dress her injury. Next she thanks they for help, and come back to her car. Men's come back to car, and back to the home.

Answer 1

Moim zdaniem wszystko dobrze tylko ten wyraz mi nie pasuję daecide

Answer 2

It was sunny, summer, beautiful day. Was 12 o'clock. Justin and Mark have holiday, so they decide go to the mountains. They take knife, tent, torch, rope, eat and some water. After hour travel they saw beautiful, high tops and climbing on them peoples. Justin and Mark choose the most difficult and dangerous top. When they climbed on the way Justin saw a lot of warnings. Justin and Mark were climbing 2 hour, when suddenly started to rain and storm. Men decide to come back when they heard shout a young woman. They decided check what going on. They saw woman. She was hanging, her face was scary and frightened. She have accident when she climbed. The weather was worst. Temperature fall down below zero. The situation was very dangerous. When men reach for her and they must cut the rope and rescue her. When Justin and Mark come down with Betty, she felt pain. Men help her and dress her in warm clothes. Next she thanks they for help, and come back to her car. Men come back to car, and back to the home. LICZE NA NAJ!!!