Question

Muszę napisać tzw. speech na angielski. Tematem jest ,,Mój sen''. Sprawdźcie słowa, czasy itd... po prostu poprawność ;) I was unconscious and dizzy. My sanity was very low. When I woke up, I saw a very long corridor. I wasn't know where am I. It looked like very old and forlorn/desolate (nie wiem, które słowo- opuszczony lub opustoszały?) house. I was getting up (nie wstawałem, tylko podnosiłem się bo leżałem na ziemii, ale nie wiem jak to napisać), when a spot of blood fell at me. I looked up. I saw dead body on the chandeleir. I was terrified. I saw door at the end of corridor. I ran to this door. I was so close, when I heard loud scream. I looked behind me. It was this body, but it was ran to me! I was paralyzed. It killed me. I saw bright light. I woke up, in the real world. I thinked, I was dead.

Answer 1

I was unconscious and dizzy. My sanity was very low. When I woke up, I saw a very long corridor. I didn't know where I was. It looked like a very old and abandoned house. I was lifting off the ground, when a spot of blood fell at me. I looked up. I saw dead body on the chandeleir. I was terrified. I saw door at the end of corridor. I ran to this door. I was so close, when I heard loud scream. I looked behind me. It was that body, but It was running to me! I was overcomed with fear. It killed me. I saw bright light. I woke up, in the real world. I was thinking, I was dead.