Question

Dam NAJ!!! Proszę o sprawdzenie mi tego tekstu i poprawienie błędów tak, żeby to miało sens. Pilne! To na jutro!
Dear Anna,
We've having fantastic time in Paris, but the weather is wet. Yesterday we visited to Eiffel Tower and Luwr. Today we were in the park. It was great. I played to volleyball with my friend. My mom stayed in the hotel, because she was tired. She slipped or readed. Today is your birthday, so lots of happy.
See you soon.
Ala

Answer 1

Dear Anna,
We are having fantastic time in Paris, but the weather is wet. Yesterday we visited the Eiffle Tower and Luwr. Today we were in the park. That was great. I played volleyball with my friend. My mom stayed in the hotel, because she was tired. She sleept or read the book. Today is your birthday, so have a lot of fun and be happy.
See you soon.
Ala

Answer 2

Dear Anna,We've having fantastic time in Paris, but the weather is wet. Yesterday we visited to Eiffel Tower and Luwr. Today we were in the park. It was great. I played to volleyball with my friend. My mom stayed in the hotel, because she was tired. She slipped or readed. Today is your birthday, so lots of happy.See you soon.Ala