Question

Czy to jest zrobione poprawnie ? Zredagujcie mi błędy . będzie naj!!

Hello Eve,

I am in Spain on holiday with your family and spend a great time.
We stayed at the hotel "Plaza. Weather is great and the food delicious.
Daily walk to the sea to swim. We have many attractions sponsored by the tourist office.
Yesterday we were in a nature reserve, it was great.
Before leaving I would like to sail a boat on the sea with the family.

See you soon. Kasia.

Answer 1

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Hello Eve,

I am in Spain on holiday with my family and we're having a great time.
We're staying at the "Plaza" hotel. Weather is great and the food is delicious.
Everyday, we go to the beach to swim. We have many attractions sponsored by the tourist office.
Yesterday, we were in a nature reserve. It was great.
Before leaving I would like to hire a boat and sail the sea with my family.

See you soon. Kasia.

Answer 2

Hello Ewa (ja bym napisała tak ale to już jak chcesz),

 

I am in Spain on holiday with my (bo jesteś u swojej rodziny, chyba że to nie jest twoja rodzina

tylko tej osoby do której piszesz list no to wtedy będzie your) family and I ("I" ponieważ ty spędzasz) spend a great time. We stayed at the hotel "Plaza".  Weather is great and the food is ("is" bo jedzenie jest przepyszne) delicious. Daily (zamiast daily ja bym użyła every day, ale jak chcesz) walk to the sea and swim. We have many attractions sponsored by the tourist office.

Yesterday we were in a nature reserve (i tu masz do wyboru) and it was great (lub). It was great. (nie może być takiego zdania, że opisujesz coś i nagle po przecinku piszesz swoją opinię. Albo dodajesz "and" albo stawiasz kropkę i twoja opinia to nowe zdanie) (możesz napisać it was great and fantastic, aby zdanie buło bardziej rozbudowane).

Before leaving I would like to sail a boat on the sea with the (może być "the" a może też być "my") family.

 See you soon, Kasia.

 

Mam nadzieję, że pomogłam. Polecam się na przyszłość i czekam na naj! :)