Question

Czy to jest poprawnie napisane ?

Class third B invites all students to workshop on healthy eating. We will show you what should eat and what do not to eat. We will learn how nutrition affects your mood and health. These workshops will be held on 6 November 2011.by the first two hours we will show you how healthy and tasty to eat at the same time we will present you different dishes and then you can taste each of them. From 12 o'clock every one of you with the products available with us will be able to cook your own dish and finish a lecture meeting on the impact of food on health and wellbeing, it will last till 14th. We invite all students, you might want to know what to eat to be healthy and feel healthy in August, after the meeting, each will receive a free lunch.

Answer 1

Moim zdaniem czytając to, to jest dobrze napisane. Uczę się już 6 lat angielskiego więc umiem. 

 

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Answer 2

Dobrze napisane mysle że twoje umiejętnosci są ponad podstawowe :P