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Dream Job for a day : Sportswoman
Friady 7 th October
6 : 00 a.m.
My dad usually takes me to school but today he's taking me to the sports filed club's Gol Częstochowa. I'm going to watch the training. I love football but I don't like early mornings.
I wear jeans and T- shirt during the week but today I'm wearing a whote T-shirt and tracksuit .
10:15 a.m.
The training started. I watched now girls were exercising . After a moment the coach sugested for me that I joined girls . Quickly I got up ang ran to the sports filed . The warm-up lased 40 minutes. Later we divided in two team and we started plaing.
16:30 p.m.
I'm usually getting back home at 15:00 p.m. but today I came back at 16:30 p.m. . He was it is a very heavy training. I would like permanently to be a member of this club.
Friday 7 th of October.
It's 6 o'clock a.m
.. go to Częstochowa
I love football but I don't like get up early mornings.
It's quarter past ten a.m
After a moment the coach suggested for me that I joined girls.
.. I got up and ...
It's half past four p.m
I'm usually getting back to home.
I wolud like to permanently ...
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