Czy to jest dobrze napisany tekst? jeśli nie prosze o wskazanie błędów. TUESDAY 14TH MAY 2013 I arrived to Tokyo at seven o'clock. last evenings and I went to hotel, and I went to bez because I was very tired. Today, I'm going to visit Rainbow Bridge, Imperial Castle and the Sanctuary of Meiji. I'm going to visit the Tample of Sengakuji and Sensoji tomorrow. My last day in Tokyo I'm going to go on shopping, buy souvenirs and rate of origami. I'm going to continue my World Travel in Bombay in Saturday. SUNDAY 19TH MAY 2013 Bombay is amazing city! Today, I'm get off the plane. I feel fantastic! Here it is colorful and beatiful! I'm going to visit India's Gate, Elephant's Care tomorrow. I'm going to visit Hanging Gardens, the Temple of Mumba Devi Mandir in Tuesday. And I'm going to my friend in Madrit in Wednesday. FRIDAY 24TH MAY 2013 Today I went in Madrit. My friend greeted me very nice. We're going to visit Plaza Mayor and Royal Castle on Saturday. We're going to visit Neptun's Fountain and Plaza de Cibeles. My last day in Madrit we're going to go at the party.
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