Czy to jest dobrze napisane?
One day sunny morning I was visiting hall in castle with my friend. We were watching picture when from wall loomed a women. We were scaring. She didn't have a head. I and my friend escaped. We now believe in ghosts.
Z góry dziękuję. ; ******
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zamiast " I and my ....." napisz "We escaped" i zakończ "And now we believe ......"
licze na naj.^^
dla mnie wszystko jest okej.